Friday, March 2, 2007
comment on elliots page
hey elliot, chiko i read your paper and i think that it is very well organized, and you cite various sources that give many examples. The only thing you need to improve on is check for some spelling errors, and i think that you should argue stronger anout why is your diet better than the vegetarian diet.
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Isabella,
Nice comment - you could be a little more precise though (what was well-organized? his arguments?)?
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